Arashi Kishu

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~General Information~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Name: Kishu, Arashi

Alias: The Faint Smile

Gender: Male

Age: 522

Visual Age: 32

Rank: Captain

Division: 5th

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Appearance~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

General Appearance:

Spoiler:

Reiatsu Color: White

Height: 6'1

Weight: 145

Body Type: Slim, Muscular

Extra Information: He has Green Eyes
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Persona~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Personality: Normally coming off as a emotionless-machine Arashi has a title within the Gotei 13 as the man with the Faint Smile. This is due him his polar opposite personality. Which what he calls separating work from play. On the off side Arashi is a caring, supportive man who likes to have fun and experience a great time everyday. This normally shown through his helpful manners, and proper respect towards everyone. Even his own subordinates. With a high inner drive and and equally high sense of justice Arashi is very focused on his duties. Arashi does believe however in punishment and if a law is broken then one must face their judgment, this even applies to himself.

The reason behind Arashi's nickname as the Faint Smile is because how he can easily go from the kind, and generous young man to a more savage almost demonic persona. As shown during many missions Arashi's cold and calculated attitude switches on. His caring, and fun-loving self disappearing in an instant, as if it next existed while a highly focused, and generally cold man takes it's place. This is due to Arashi's sense of justice, and in the face of danger, or when ordered Arashi believes that 100% is called for no matter what the situation is. Because of this high moral status, and down right inner drive Arashi's focus and sheer resolve allow him to preform on a higher level then one would expect. As a leader Arashi's quick reflexes, and even quicker mind allow him to find an opening to better serve for the protection of his allies, the completion of the mission, and the survival of all under his command. Shi smile also causes discomfort in many people as it holds both kindness, and delivers the sense of destruction with it.

Likes: Fun, relaxing, protecting his friends, Soul Society, food, training, Kido, fighting, Honorable people. and THE LAW

Dislikes: Those that kill without reason, hollow, arrancers, dishonorable people, failure

Goals: To become Captain-Commander

Insecurities: The lost of anyone under his command

Fears: Failing

Strengths: Swrodmenship, Shunpo, Kido, his mind and Knowlegde of kido amassed over the years.

Weaknesses: hand to hand combat, Failing, Stamnia, anger when allies are killed, Merciful

Phobias: Failing

Extra Information: (optional. Things that didn’t go into the other categories would go here)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~History~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bio: Arashi was born into the Kishu family, a noble family which has survived for many many years. With the job of Head of house the honor of being Captain of the 5th Division is given. If the Head should become Captain of any other Division they are dishonored by the Clan, and cast out, their Noble ranking crushed.

During his early years Arashi was discovered to have high amount of reaitsu stored within. Due to this he training started 10 years earlier then most future heads of house would. Over the next 25 years Arashi trained in the art of the sword, and channeling his reishi through his body and sword. after 30 years of training he was admitted into the Soul Reaper Academy where he exceled at Kido, and Zanjutsu.

During his last years Arashi's skills were that of a seated officer and he was admitted into the 5th Division as it's 8th seat, it would take another 10 years before he unlocked his shikai which in turn skyrocketed his abilities and allowed to the rank of 4th seat.

After a few years mastering his shikai Arashi noticed that his abilities were not maturing and bankai wouldn't be reached anytime soon. With his fate on the line Arashi submerged himself in darkness, disappearing for several months. Due to his family ties and his father serving as Captain of the 5th he was simple signed off as being given a long term mission in the human world. When he returned he had nearly mastered his newly unlocked bankai.

20 years later his father died, and he took up the title as Captain of the 5th Division.

*cracks knuckles*

Righto. First off, HI I'm Marcus, the resident global mod and I'll be grading your profile today. Remember, everything I say is to help you get your application to a passable standard, not to find a way to deny your app.


Grammar: To be frank, the grammar usage throughout the application is a bit wonky, making the application hard to read. I recommend going back over the application and rewording/working the grammar aspect of the profile. Trust me, this is a HUGE part of the profile for the simple fact that, in you using proper grammar, we as staff know then your skill level and capabilities as a writer, which betters your chances.

Appearance: Pics are great, but we still need something written here bud.

History: He's 522 and a captain right? Maybe his history should be more in depth and more fluid than just four VERY short paragraphs you think? You're definitely going to have to bulk this up. What I did read was very lacking in a fluid motion, more like a random list of things than an actual retelling of his history. Think of this like a past tense RP post. Write it with high quality, not base facts without the glitter.

adding onto this. Your Captains test hasn't been approved of yet. The application will not be approved until it has been.

sry for the confusion. Taking back my previous reply.

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